Originally posted by Number of the Beast
you know...I'd like to say that your lyrics are overplayed, and that I agree with these guys...but I can't help thinking, "At least he didn't write:

BLOOOOODDDDDDDD!!!!!
I NEED BLOOD TO PAINT MY HOUSE!
I NEED BLOOD TO PAINT MY SPOUSE!
I NEED BLOOD TO BRING ME YOUTH!
I NEED BLOOD TO BRING ME TRUUUUUUUUUTTTHHHH!!!!

BLOOD: IT'S HEALTHY STUFF!
BLOOD: IT'S NOT TOO GRUFF!
BLOOD: IT LIVES INSIDE!
BLOOD: YOU CANNOT HIIIIIIIIIIIIDDDEEE!!!

YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!

(tapping solo)

What song is that?

O yea and guys, just so you know, my song isn't necesarilly about love its about being alone for the rest of the life because that good things have evaded you and people are leaving you and its just basically about the pain of loneliness and how people do that to others...

but i know it still needs ALOT of work (as with alot of the stuff i write which is usually a little more hardcore) so ok