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This song could use some work. I think you have the concept of what you want to say down, but I'm sure this isn't quite the way I would deliver. Also, if you're going to accuse someone of having "diarhea of the mouth" try not using cus words. I know when I read the song... I thought that mean "potty mouth", so it confused me. That was pretty good for a first song I must admit.