[Edited by Guitarlove9090 on 06-30-2003 at 04:34 PM]
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Your lyrics aren't a bad start. Try to use more word choice to make them more visual .i.e. instead of saying "they are really me" try something like "they exist withen me". O and if you can please give me some feedback on my lyrics as well.
[Edited by Guitarlove9090 on 06-30-2003 at 04:34 PM]
[Edited by Guitarlove9090 on 06-30-2003 at 04:34 PM]