Hello, my name is Zack Katz. I've written a new song, and I'd like to have it critiqued.

The song was inspired by a discussion that I had about whether drugs tap into a vein of existance that allows a preview of the afterlife. It's also about suicide in the face of addiction. It is a new style of song writing for me, and an evolution.

The song features cascading organs, a hypnotic beat, and dark, foreboding lyrics.

One Drug (Closer)

I would appreciate it if people would review this, and my other songs.

Thanks!
-Zack
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs

One Drug (Closer)

trees become a wall of motion
drawing shadows with the headlights on
my future is always weaving
i don't know how long until it's done

the cadence of the needle's march
pushing ninety, and wrapping thread
groping for a rung of the ladder
one drug closer to heaven
one drug closer to heaven

sometimes when i drive at night
the white lines sing soft lullabyes
an ocean song; the waves of travel
calling, guiding me to a rocky shore
one drug closer to heaven (one drug closer)
one drug closer to heaven (one drug closer)

[Edited by Zack Katz on 05-25-2003 at 05:50 AM]