New Songs, Please Critique


Zack Katz
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Zack Katz
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04/11/2003 3:51 am
Hi, I'm Zack Katz, and I've recently gotten a usb3 direct mix, which has been working wonderfully.
I was wondering if people would critique my songs, put in order of radio playability:

http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/autumncolors.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/forwardintoprayer.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/mirrordreams.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/moralityofdiction.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/mourntheflag.mp3

Most lyrics are available through http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/index.html

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it.

-Zack Katz

[Edited by Zack Katz on 04-14-2003 at 05:23 PM]
wearing autumn colors, she says
"one more leaf and it is winter"
one more love, and i am lost

www.zackkatz.com/songs/
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04/12/2003 3:08 am

been listening to your songs. Not my style but i see that you feel your song more than a lot of people I met and I respect that.

The first comment I could say is try to normalise your voice in the mix. I was taken away often in autumn colors because your voice was sometimes coming out of nowhere. If you could mix it so that you don't have too many of those peaks.

and dude, extend your song mirror dreams, it's very good. I got a bit frustrated by the fact that it was so short. You could easely extend the song and work on dynamics but you did a fine job to express your feeling in it. Hats off to you

Would be nice to have some drums. well maybe not drums but percussions, I don't think your style would mix good with a drum but some percussion would be nice. But that's just me :)

anyway, don't stop creating. Like I said not my style, a little too artistic for me but it probably appeals to other people so do it for you and them :) that's the whole point of music
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Dr_simon
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Dr_simon
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04/12/2003 3:23 am
Hey Zack, I have just noticed that you have posted this message a couple of times and that is not really a good thing.

Any way I have offered some critique in the recording section.

All the best
S

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Zack Katz
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Zack Katz
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04/12/2003 4:05 am
Sorry, I am new to the Guitar Tricks forum. Most forums that's common practice, but I apologize for multiple posting.

-Zack
wearing autumn colors, she says
"one more leaf and it is winter"
one more love, and i am lost

www.zackkatz.com/songs/
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Dr_simon
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Dr_simon
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04/12/2003 5:10 am
Not a biggy ! Hope you enjoy Guitar Tricks !
My instructors page and www.studiotrax.net for all things recording.
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