critique a new song please

Hi, I'm Zack Katz, and I've recently gotten a usb3 direct mix, which has been working wonderfully.
I was wondering if people would critique my songs, put in order of radio playability:

http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/autumncolors.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/forwardintoprayer.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/mirrordreams.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/moralityofdiction.mp3
http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/mourntheflag.mp3

Most lyrics are available through http://www.zackkatz.com/songs/index.html

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it.

-Zack Katz

[Edited by Zack Katz on 04-14-2003 at 05:00 PM]