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Jolly McJollyson
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Jolly McJollyson
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08/21/2004 5:37 am
Originally Posted by: randallnm
Built a fire on a mountaintop

On this rock, let the waters rise

But bury our promises in the ground.
[Edited by randallnm on 03-20-2003 at 11:46 PM]


These three lines make me think of fantasy metal bands like the glorious "Hammerfall"

Let the waters RIIIIISE Let the hammer FAAAALLLLLL
The Demonic CRIIIIEESSSS We'll defeat them all!!!
We cast the FLAAAAAAAMMMES on the MOUNTAINTOP
AND WE BURY THEIR NAMES WHEN THEIR SHIELDS DO DROP!!!!

WAAAAAAaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAA!
I want the bomb
I want the P-funk!

My band is better than yours...