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daveichler
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daveichler
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Joined: 04/02/01
Posts: 13
03/29/2003 10:54 pm
i just listened to your song snow would melt, thats a great song! You got some really good things going on in the guitar part and some nasty chord progressions. Your lyrics fit really well with your music too. Its a really good song, keep coming back with more!