Great song Faith, seemes like I hear JD's influence from his later work in it, love the harmony voices in the middle of the song.
The lyrics remind me of a wish I asked the Lord when I was a young kid; please Lord don't let me die until the day I have seen it all and don't amuse myself any more and want to die myself, but turning 62 in 2 months I still are having a ball every day and still lots of plans for my life so looks like I will need to go to at least the double of my age now LOL
Maybe you should open up a Soundclick acount and put the song there to see if people like it, lots of famous artists use soundclick and lots of talent hunters there to so give it a try, it's free.
Herman