Originally Posted by: hsnoeckx

... but the bass sounds like all over the place beginning with Bm and then E major and then jumping to a G# major ( first time I listend I thought the bass wasn't tuned properly )? sounds really confusing and I would change that, also for the first guitar playing the double stops along with the lyrics, in the intro okay bud when the singing begins I would go for some more rhythmic part.

But one thing is for sure, that guy can sing and it fits the song.

erman

I think I see what you mean Herman, I made changes to the song. I have to work with the bass, drum and vocal tracks as is, the only mods I can make would be to the guitar which is me (unless I spend more money - and that's not going to happen). I think the song should be i iv v, but from what you describe the bass is i iv vi.

Anyway, this is draft 7(b) and feedback is welcomed. I am a hands on learner.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUswdmNT6Kg&t=33s