Nice song but the bass sounds like all over the place beginning with Bm and then E major and then jumping to a G# major ( first time I listend I thought the bass wasn't tuned properly )? sounds really confusing and I would change that, also for the first guitar playing the double stops along with the lyrics, in the intro okay bud when the singing begins I would go for some more rhythmic part.

But one thing is for sure, that guy can sing and it fits the song.

Herman