I used a better mic and an akai "eieio" interface. I added a verse and an empty (just rhythm) insturmental break.
It's the same keyboard and guitar and all, just better recording equipment. It's still pretty raw.
I realize that the vocals and guitar are still a little sloppy, byt what do you guys think of the format and lyrics, etc?
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