little sample

https://app.box.com/s/hv1t1h4fr002gogw9ctcb7ap5kzosdgp
feedback welcome, thanks for listening.

the next track will be much longer, don't have time to loop the bass.
used my fender strat and boss js10. hope someone out there in gt land likes it..its the start of my first project once I can get my recording skills down.

I listened to this and your other little sample. It sounds cool, though I think you may need to tweak the delay parameters a bit. It's hard to say if there are too many repeats or if the timing of the delay is off. I find that tweaking delay settings feels like an art in itself :). Sometimes many repeats works when you think it won't, and vice versa.

Keep it up...sounding really good!

THANK you maggior for listening, that's some good advice on the delay! :-)
Glad you liked it.

For me the clearer sound would be nicer. Now it is like stretching a rubber band. Single pitches don't stand out so well.

That's the beauty of music, were all different :-).