Hi..Just Listen and Tell your Opinions!

Hi folks...
My name is Osman...Im 17 and live in turkey,izmir...
Ive been playing since 09.09.1999
Some times I feel no proccess..(Sorry about my English)
But I like to play whatever!
Anyway I want you to listen to one of my songs and give your opinions about that...I know it really helps a amateur guitarist to improve..Thankz!

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The hyperlink of the song...(dont forget to change the extension to "mp3")
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GraveYard Suite by EternaLcRY
http://members.lycos.co.uk/ecry/mp3/gs.audio
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Also my HomePage (some licks,other songs,my pix..etc)
http://members.lycos.co.uk/ecry/
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welcome to the board dude, except your file can't be opened, so chack it out, and post it again! (By the way, make it light, 2.06 megs take a long time for our poor dial up friends)

welcome to the board... enjoy the place... just post the link again please...

Again, welcome to the forum. As for you English, don't worry - as long as we understand what you're getting at you'll be fine...
2.06meg will take a while for us dial-up users (sigh) I'll give you my opinion once it's finished. Until then, enjoy yourself and carry on!

Hey Osman welcome to the board :) In order to open that file you need to say what program created it so that windows will open it....good luck with your second try at posting it.

hi folks...:))
thanx for just trying to download and also reading mine topic:))
sometimes no one cares and I would be so upset..:))
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Ok now all about me!
I have a Turkish made Ibanez copy electro guitar..(its name is "Eraser")..It really sucks..and it's terrible..:)but enough..:)
I have no sound proccesors..So to compose and record one song takes a lot of time...First I arrange some drum stuff with Cubase VST 5.01 and make it a wave file..Then I get it played behind Guitar FX Box 2.5 (http://www.guitar-fxbox.com) then play all the rhytms,solos,arpeggios..etc...Then make it mp3 but though all the parts of the song are recorded in one wave file,you might guess the quality...)
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It is 2 minutes and 15 seconds I think (Graveyard Suite!)..So I didnt change the kbps...If I did,I would guess it really sucks!..
I am also a dial-up user..But be patient while downloading...it's OK?
I changed the extension of the .mp3 to .audio..So after download make it .mp3..just change the extension:)
OK?
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Im waiting for your comments!

Some of you could not download the file maybe..
It depends on server I think..But when I tried 15:55 22.05.2002 it worked...:)
I mean link is correct!
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GraveYard Suite by EternaLcRY
http://members.lycos.co.uk/ecry/mp3/gs.audio
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I've heard your stuff now, and I like it :) I found it very remenicent of Iron Maiden.....ok lots of people use harmony like that but Maiden are the band I thought could have written that....its the general sound I think, and your solos. Sometimes it didnt always sound completely in tune but thats probably just the recording process....I've recorded myself on simple cassete tapes before having used an electric tuner before hand and I've sounded awful, my string bends in particular were'nt to good.....but who cares? the ones who sound perfect are the ones who have money for good gear. Your recording shows talent, keep 'em coming :)

I like the arpeggios on the clean parts of the song, but I didn't particularly favor the lead over them, because the tone on the rhythm and the lead was the same, and you were playing in the same register as the arpeggios, so it sounded a bit muddy at times. The harmony parts were good and I especially liked the part from 1:48-1:56. Good tone on your distortion. Very good work, overall.