I wanted to say too Randy, that my opinions were offered with the knowledge that you are obviously an excellent guitar player, and definitely have lots of talent & potential. Lots of people post stuff that we can check out and give feedback, but with you, we are not talking about someone who saying "hey I just made my first demo... wadda ya think?"... for that, if its passable, I'd say "sounding good, keep at it!".
For you, you're trying to establish yourself as a credible & viable entity in the music business... and I think there's real potential for that to happen because a lot of the right pieces are there... just not the complete puzzle *yet* but I really think it could be, so stick with it.