At the 1min mark, for me, everything just went haywire. Too many busy parts, and it really sounded like the instruments were working against each other, rather than supporting each other. It kind of drops back down a bit, getting a little mellower around 1:30, but then at 2min its back to chaos.
Listening to the opening of the song, I think you really have something there. I don't know if you'll understand what I mean, but I think you have to be "true" to that opening... be courageous; its obvious you can play, but make a statement with that solo rather than just throwing a whole lot of busy work in there. I think you've got a great solo inside you waiting to come out, but you need to let go of proving that your a flashy guitarist and just play more from the heart, like you did a the beginning of the song.
Just my 2 cents... if you're happy with it, that's all that matters!