Needs kerning. That is to say, the spacing between characters. I tightened them up for an example (linked). Sometimes you have to manually move the letter to get rid of the odd gaps in the typography. The font won't always space it right for you. Ok on a word doc but in logos, good to fix it up.

As for the logo, I don't want to seem too critical; it's decent but kind of falls in to the standard fantasy/metal logos. My 'in a previous life' experience, I've seen quite a lot of them. It's well done and projects what it needs but does not differentiate you from others of the same genre.