Right Love, Right Now! (Lyrics)


JoaquinCastillo
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07/03/2011 9:51 pm
Hey guys,

This is a song that I wrote por a compilation CD. And these are the lyrics:

Verse 1:
Little miss dark walking up slowly
Turning my head forward for attention
Intoxicating, unholy
Ain’t no backing from this starry complication

Pre-chorus:
So why won’t you tell me
What’d you think ‘bout love?!
I can’t explain it, I now it makes me wild
Keep getting closer, freshed up in bloom
Reeking havoc, my own lovers perfume

Chorus:
I can’t explain it; it’s just something that we do
‘Cause every time I loose, it always starts with something new
No point in fighting, temptation filled with violence
I feel my blood a rising when I crawl inside her wound

Verse2:
Suffocating from her madness
A clear case of acute depravation
Wonder when this’d be all over
Is this Heaven or is it damnation?

Pre-chorus:
So why don’t you tell me
What’d you think ‘bout love?!
I can’t explain, I now it makes me wild
Keep getting closer, freshed up in bloom
Reeking havoc, my own lovers perfume

Chorus:
I can’t explain it; it’s just something that we do
‘Cause every time I loose, it always starts with something new
No point in fighting, temptation filled with violence
I feel my blood a rising when I crawl inside her wound


Outro:
Right Love, Right Now! (x4)
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prateekmasta
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07/07/2011 2:12 am
well these are some really deep lyrics man
you r realy good at this
just make sure you make good melody on it
and i think that after the end of chorus that comes second time
this needs some lyrics for a bit different melody than pre chor and chor and
after that when chorus would come for third time it would sound great
i am saying it cuz i think chorus is strong.
else it is up to u. GOOD JOB !
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07/18/2011 2:46 pm
Originally Posted by: prateekmastaGOOD JOB !


Thanks man! Here is the link to the song:

http://soundcloud.com/juako81/right-love-right-now
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Allen Hopgood
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07/28/2011 11:36 pm
Cool song. I can hear Gene Simmons singing this.
Commit to Mastery!



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