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Zelig
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Zelig
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09/26/2010 9:39 am
Hi everyone,
This is a song I composed and performed with a Swedish singer. It's a rehearsal of a song we will record soon with very different arrangements.
Feedback is more than welcome.
Thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5VIPLzSZAdg
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shayman1
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09/29/2010 9:43 am
Cool song:) Not really my thing, so very difficult to offer any criticism or opinion but I can appreciate the sound and it seems very accomplished. Nice video too. I think I'll look into doing a video having seen yours.
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Zelig
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Zelig
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09/29/2010 7:16 pm
Thanks,
It’s not very difficult to make such a video. Even with one camera (we had two although not very good ones) and even alone, you can do it.
I listened your butterfly tatoo and it’s good. I like the song and the voice. The only thing I didn’t like that much was your guitar sound. It needs to be equalized ( just my opinion and my computer's speakers are bad) but the rest is very nice.
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Victory Hil
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10/01/2010 10:10 pm
I agree. The song is cool. This is not my style either; although, I did like the laid back, breezy feel of the instrumentation. I will listen to this again sometime in the future when I get a chance. I'd like to hear the lyrics with more precision, as the song topic seemed to jump back and forth from 'meeting a cute guy' to 'feeling free and/or sad'.

Would I listen to this song if it were on the radio? Yes, on a sunny afternoon, with an iced tea in my hand.

I'd be interested in hearing the new arrangements.
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Zelig
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10/03/2010 3:32 pm
Victory Hil
Thanks for your nice comment. I will post the new arrangement in the same thread. This should be in a month and it will be very different. The problem with understanding the lyrics is probably due to the way we recorded the song. We had to put some foam rubber before the microphone to avoid some noises and that’s why the voice sounds is a bit muffeled.
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11/03/2010 5:58 am
Thanks a lot for your nice comment, Kurtdaniel. It means a lot.
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