I wasn't ignoring you:) I have set the post so that I get notified when I have a reply..but I didn't, so I just checked back and saw you had replied, and don't worry I'm not easily offended and always open to suggestions. Why not? that's what I asked for!
I like the line 'Let our dreams collide', the actual line before is 'Come on for the ride' so 'Let our dreams collide' follows on quite nicely from that. Funnily enough I'm making the rock version recording this weekend so I'll try that line in there. I think it will sound better so thanks for that. You have some very good ideas I think:)
I'm glad you like the song though and I'll post a link to the fully recorded version.