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jcashfanaus
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jcashfanaus
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05/23/2010 10:05 am
I've written a couple of other songs, one with alternate versions ("Dreams") and "I'd Follow You" if anyone has any honest opinion they'd like to share.

Dreams #1:
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It doesn't matter what people do
It doesn't matter what people say
When I dream of you I drift away
Everybody's got to have a dream
And from you my dreams will never sway

Somewhere in my heart
You're always there
You're always welcome to me
You've got all my love
And in my heart you'll always be
Love, that peaceful dove

Every day and all night
I dream sweet dreams of you
You're always in my mind's sight
And I hope you have dreams of me too


Dreams #2:
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Everyone's got to dream
And my dreams are of you
And when you dream
I hope you dream of me too

I'm so lonely these cold winter days
I can barely get rid of my blues
All I can do is dream in colours and hues
To get rid of my hurting blues

Will you come to visit me soon
I'll sing you a love song tune
Remember those days we were together
We thought those days would last forever


Dreams #3
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When I dream
I can't help getting the blues
Sweet colours and hues
Will you dream of me too

It's my dreams
That get me down
When you're not around
These blues I've always found

My sweet valentine
Won't you say you're mine
I'd give my all for you
And shake of these blues


I'd Follow You
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I'd follow you
Wherever you go
Wherever you stay
I'd sit and pray

Please don't go
I'd just follow you
Wherever you go
I'd follow you

I love you like a burning flame
I hope you feel the same
But I got a feeling
A sinking feeling of no
And you'd get up and go

Still I'd follow you
Wherever it takes us
I'd follow you
I'd take that big bus
And I'd trail behind you