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jarler
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01/10/2010 8:55 pm
I've been playing about three months now. I signed up for GuitarTricks a day or so after I purchased my guitar and I've been taking private lessons from an instructor for about two months now. I'm interested in getting some feedback.

Here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SdjMGEyr_B8

I was having problems with my strumming sounding too choppy and mechanical. I've been working on it the past few days, so what you're seeing in the video is an improvement.

Any constructive criticism is appreciated!
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01/10/2010 9:10 pm
I have been playing for 3 months too (acoustic), and you have smoother chord changes than me thats for sure! Improving every day though....:)Sounds good to me! ;)
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01/11/2010 12:30 am
better then I could do..
keep up the good work..
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01/11/2010 1:44 am
Sounds great! You are doing the right thing by using GT and taking lessons from a private instructor. Both tools will really help you learn quickly, and by the sounds of your video you have truly come a long way in a short amount of time. Keep posting more videos and keep up the good work!
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01/11/2010 6:14 am
Your strumming sounds quite nice. As far as the sound, I couldn't detect any strumming issues, but from watching you, I can see you're a little stiff. But it's nothing to worry about. It gets easier over time. Just think "loose and relaxed" when you play.

I did notice one other thing, though, but it's something everyone does as a beginner. But the sooner you break the habit, the better off you'll be. Ideally, in regards to chord changes, you want all your fingers to move as one. Particularly when going from C to G (which is hard, for sure, as it involves moving every finger) I could see that you set your little and ring fingers on the 1st and second string first, then got your index and middle fingers situated.

If you can, I'd recommend spending about 5 minutes a day of your practice time really focusing on those hard chord changes. Take it really slow and try to land all your fingers in their place at the same time.

All in all, it sounds great, though! You're better than I remember being at 3 months. Keep it up!
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01/11/2010 1:55 pm
I think it's great! Good timing. :)
...so ever since then, I always hang on to the buckle.
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01/11/2010 3:09 pm
Thanks for the input guys!

Regarding my G major... yeah, I'm aware of it. I started out learning to finger the chords starting at the bottom and working my way up. I've been practicing moving my index and middle fingers first, and when I get it right, all four fingers seem to hit the strings at the same time... I just don't have it down enough to try it for the video. :)
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01/11/2010 6:28 pm
You are way better than I was at 6 months. The only thing I can see is that you might want to use more of your wrist and less of your elbow when you strum. I know a lot of players of have had elbow problems from using it too much while strumming. Just a suggestion that you might want to try. Really good, you seem to have a really natural talent for rhythm and strumming.

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01/11/2010 6:57 pm
I noticed some good things in this video.

Even though your left hand was lagging a little bit behind the right, you kept trucking along and keeping up with the tempo of the song. That's good, because when you're actually playing music with a band, you can't stop or slow down to think -- what you just played is in the past. The song must go on!

Check out the Strumming lesson on Free Ride, taught by Anders Mouridsen, under the Songs. I don't think you were stiff, you were just strumming with more of your elbow instead of your wrist.

As a sort of similar example, imagine if you turned the steering wheel of your car with your shoulders instead of your elbows. Try it right now and see what I mean. Keep your elbows and wrists locked and just turn to turn the imaginary steering wheel with your shoulders. You'll see it looks "stiff."

The point is, you don't *need* to be moving a larger part of your body (shoulders, back, elbows) if you can get the same sound from moving a smaller one (wrist, fingers). It takes more energy to move your elbow (and your whole forearm and hand which are connected to it) than it does just your wrist. You can also get more control and nuance out of your wrist than your elbow.

I see a little bit of combination of wrist and elbow in your video, which is good. When you're learning, it's good to take apart the mechanics of your arm and see where you're losing energy. It's like martial arts.

You can think about it this way: The area you are actually "playing" with your right hand, from low E to high E is really only about 2 inches across at its widest. If you take that into consideration, why should a stroke be *drastically* longer than that? If you make your stroke 18 inches long from top to bottom, what are you really doing but strumming 16 more inches of strings that aren't there? If you were to build a machine to strum guitar strings, you wouldn't want to spend the extra money and energy making it's "arm" move that much. There would be the extra cost of repairs, the extra materials, but the result would be the same. There's only so much energy that the strings can actually absorb, and at some point the extra stroke doesn't do anything. I'm not saying to only make your stroke 2 inches long. Just think about the idea of it and experiment.

If you watch a lot of rock videos and live bands you'll see them strumming like crazy with their whole arm, but that's really just for show (or for the feel of the player). Same thing with drummers. (Raising the sticks above their heads and swinging all the way down doesn't really do anything other than look cool and feel fun.)

You could practice both ways of strumming (wrist and elbow) and learn how to switch between them to get the best control and best sound. Drummers practice separately with shoulder, elbow, wrists, and fingers and integrate them for different purposes. It's strange that these same techniques are not essential for guitarists.

-Carl.

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01/12/2010 3:02 am
Thats sounds great for 3 months! Your definetely alot better than i was at 3 months.
"Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent"-Victor Hugo
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01/12/2010 3:13 pm
maybe its just a silly observation but for only playing 3 months I thought it was great that you had it all memorized and didnt need to refer to a tab sheet or watch the computer for chord changes.
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01/13/2010 1:25 pm
For 3 months.....excellent!!!
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01/13/2010 1:48 pm
Thanks a lot guys! It's good to know that I'm doing pretty well for three months.

You've all inspired me to work even harder. Hopefully there will be a significant improvement in my next video.
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02/24/2010 7:41 pm
Well, I've uploaded my next video. You can find it here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1cZ7Zvq1xmo

I played a bit of the song from the original video, and in my biased opinion, it sounds a little better this time around. Obviously, lots of room for improvement, but I'm making progress.

I've included some other things too, barre chords, power chords, some lead and scales. Some of it is not for the faint of heart! You've been warned.

Constructive criticism welcome! :cool:
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02/25/2010 1:54 pm
Hey man,
Your doing great.. wished I could progress that fast..
Do you work with an live instructor at all..
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02/25/2010 2:09 pm
Thanks!

I do work with a live instructor. I've been taking weekly, 30 minute lessons since shortly after getting my guitar. It's great to have someone to ask questions and to teach you new things based on how you're progressing.
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02/25/2010 3:21 pm
Originally Posted by: jarlerWell, I've uploaded my next video.


That's totally awesome! If I have not said it already, I admire your snuff for being able to post your learning process. There's definitely a lot of progress here. Keep it up! :)
...so ever since then, I always hang on to the buckle.
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03/27/2010 3:02 pm
Nice job, I have also only been playing for a short time. Tried 30 years ago at 16 and gave it up, just got back into it. You play well and are better than me. Your video has given me a boot in the a$$ to practice harder.

I figured it was an Eagles song just couldn't quite make out the song. I have been practicing Lyin Eyes by the eagles.

Can't wait to see more progress videos from you, it is keeping me on my toes.

Jaime
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