I went and listened to your audio you soundclick page and overall, you nearly have a solid disc of material. With the exception of the electronica 'Late for Work' deal, the total of the material makes for a pretty good cohesive release. I hear so many different things going on that are just quite good. From Pink Floyd, to what I said above, to Steely Dan to all kinds of others, it just seems to work. Ever looked at a label?
Thing is, I've been in the music biz for a long time even to the extent of having a small label nationally distributed (if you wanna get screwed..that's where it happens) and my point is that I've heard enough stuff over the years and had to develop an ear for good. Not 'my' good. Honestly, I would suggest that what you dp is not my taste. Doesn't matter, good is good. Think about the label deal. Also, I think Diary of a Spaceman would be very cool with lyrics.