[QUOTE=Mpaq - I did like the tone you got there, it was just too loud for the track. Some nice phrases and good use of the tone range. The gaps were a bit too obvious though. Some good ideas though - I think you could easily make that into something very good indeed./QUOTE]

thanks Steve...yea those gaps threw me so i just shortended them up and ignored them for now. Im trying to learn Cubase so maybe will do a retake and will remix the volume levels as well.