Originally Posted by: equatorGood job, bro.
Excellent tone, good mix, all the right notes.

The only thing that sounded odd is after the bass fill. You started a little out of tempo and there is a gap between the end of the bass fill and the second verse. IMO
Also, there is another gap in the third verse. If you connect those two sections it would sound much better.

I May be wrong, let’s hear what the other guys think. ;)
But, it sounds good overall.
Nice take, keep up the good work. :)

thanks man, appreciate the feedback. My thinking with the first gap was to faciliate a transition with the pickup change. The others were just to break it up a little, i have a tendency to run on with the same patterns.