Originally Posted by: mpaqOk here's my first take. This was recorded direct using Audacity and the speaker simulation setting in my preamp. I'm in the process of re-doing this in CuBase, and direct micing of my amp but thought I'd post this now so you guys can give me some pointers....Mpaq's music page

Good job, bro.
Excellent tone, good mix, all the right notes.

The only thing that sounded odd is after the bass fill. You started a little out of tempo and there is a gap between the end of the bass fill and the second verse. IMO
Also, there is another gap in the third verse. If you connect those two sections it would sound much better.

I May be wrong, let’s hear what the other guys think. ;)
But, it sounds good overall.
Nice take, keep up the good work. :)