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LegitTrick
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LegitTrick
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11/08/2008 3:13 am
actually using "like" makes it a simile. lol

The use of metaphors you described is almost exactly their style. Although you don't want to copy too closely to them, try making it more your own. Also try using hyperboles, mixing it up a bit.