Hey dude that was well worth submitting, seriously - some very nice ideas in there. It followed the backing very well and I love that effect, never used anything like that before. Were you using the same scale that Equator mentioned at the beginning, don't know what I used but there were elements of whatever myself and Equator used in your take - no idea what the scale was. I just used my ear so don't ask me but yours had a very nice jam feel to it. Listen to it a few times and you might come up with some more ideas that you can drop in to give it some more structure. Good job though - as I said, well worth posting!