I took all the advice from these forums, and actualy listened and completly re-mixed Post War Dreaming.
Now if I can pester anyone who heard the original to give it one more listen and let me know if the advice worked better.
It went as follows
1. Can't hear the vocals. bad mix... Fix it
2. Too busy of a clarinet, competes with vocals... fix it
3. Can't hear any guitar, are you sure you used a guitar... fix it
4. Piano too loud and busy.. fix it
5. Bass too low.. fix it
Well... I've gave it my best to fix what I had... with what I have..
Post War Dreaming
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6804036&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6804036&q=hi