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sunburstcharly
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sunburstcharly
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04/18/2008 9:58 am
Originally Posted by: earthman buckI wrote this one night about a month ago, considered it done, then added music and a bridge a couple nights ago. I don't think it's anything too special, but I like playing it and the lyrics aren't totally meaningless, so I thought I might as well post it.

Sunbeams invaded the windows,
crawled up to the ceilings,
invoking strong feelings.
I'm on the other side now,
a stranger in town,
in stranger surrounds.

Remember your history, boy,
and the light in the room
when they left you too soon.
And how you'd feel let down and pine
to stay frozen in time
but still upward she'd climb.

With speech patterns stolen
from people you'd known for a day
you leave us so willingly
once you start talking that way --
talk away.


I rode past a thousand proud urban farms,
sad and unceasing,
always increasing.
Taking in all I could allow,
arms raised and spread out,
crucified, I shout

I am the one turned away from the sun,
making amends with the enemy's friends
I die amongst stars as you stare down the moon
You're in tune.



im not sayin its brillent but i do to right lyrics and is this the type of music is it rock , bluse , hip hop or just plain smooth music
these are hount me ??? :confused: :)