I am not going to pretend to I understand these lyrics, but I do like a few of the lines and the rhyme. As I said before, I do not enjoy trying to analysis what the writer had in mind. When I hear a song, I just want to enjoy it without thinking too much about its meaning. Call me crazy, but that’s the way I am! You really don’t need to call me crazy, Looney is fine.

I think you should try connecting with you listeners. Of course, many on this site write for themselves and if others like it or get it fine, but they don’t really care if others get it or not. That’s fine, but when you post something, you are asking for opinions and this just happens to be mind. I’m sure others will enjoy you song and will criticize my comments.

Good luck on your songwriting.