Originally Posted by: looneytunesGo with it. It's yours.
The intro shouldn't be more than 15 sec.
You should get to the chorus as soon as possible.
In this case after the second verse is fine.
The chorus should repeat the title of the song. "Jammed to Victory"?????
If it's a guitar song you need a guitar solo.
A bridge is only needed if the song is too long.
The bridge is to change the introduce a different sound to cut the bordem.
The song should not be longer than 3.5 mins. unless it is done live.

You got now. Record it and post it.
I will be waiting to hear it.

thanks for all the help but i have a question or two.
the first lead break, does it work as a chours since im using the chours riffs as a backing?
the bridge i put in there, if it doesnt fit into the song should i go from the second chours right back into the verse or should i add another lead break inbetween?

for the outro chours is it musically ok to change the wording of the chours?