Originally Posted by: looneytunesMy thought would be that you thought you were only dreaming, but when you wake up the Hendrix guitar is at the foot of your bed.

Anyway, it's yours. Go with it, but I want to hear the finish.

i see where you were going, but you still need to reveal to the listener that it was all just a dream (or was it). to me at least the last verse and bridge need to engage the listener and try to get them to remember when they wanted to be a rock star, and those gooffy memories of playing air guitar in the mirror.

this was a post about how the structure a song so lets write out this one.

intro
verse
lead break (using chours riffs as backing)
verse
chours
solo break
chours
bridge
verse
outro solo (using chours riffs as backing)