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BrokenJera
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BrokenJera
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02/28/2008 6:27 pm
that sounds awasome looney you should copy write that. i could write riffs to that right now. just give it the ac/dc kind of crunch. it does need a bridge and a third verse at least though. kind of a revealing. with out going into much thought it would need to be something like
bridge:
i started all this to be just like you
it took me forever to understand
your the only you
and ive just gotta be like me
verse 3
i look at all the heros, posted on my wall
i learned to be just like them
when it was me i should have copied
then i might be a hero, posted on a wall

something like that but it would take me a while to write something that sounded as good as looneytunes.

i was looking over the paper i have the whole thing written on and i got that 'psycho stalker' vibe from it so ill just start over from the beginning.

i never really noticed how much that weed stuff really messed with my head. now im really glad i gave it all up.
They say the END is near, but I'm Tired of waiting.