Thanks for the input guys, ok then lets work on something thats meant for radio. mark2dude presented some subject matter so we'll try to work from that, "Left me there'. So that could be the last line in the chorus and we need to comeup with something to fit into that and not stray too far off from the point. I'll have a go.

Saturday nite at the dance,
No turning back, no second chance,
She just winked and flung her hair...
around and she left me there.

hope thats not too lame, maybe someone could improve on that or come up with verses.