Hi

I had a little listen and I am impressed by the technical skills that you have on the guitar however I feel that the track is a little too rigid. It follows the rules to strictly kinda thing.. I don't "feel" anything when I hear it.. uhm.. I'm trying to describe my thoughts clearly but it's so subjective to my perception that it's difficult to put into words. It was too technical may be.. too robotic.. but then.. may be that is the point. Like Nine Inch Nails is the first group to really impress me in the industrial scene and that definitely has robotic, technical, apathetic-themed sounds too.. So it's not a bad thing by any means.. just that I don't really like it as a whole.

EDIT: Hehe.. you can't like everything I suppose. :)