So based on all of your collective feedback, Im going to keep practicing on this track with empasis on...
1. less effects if any at all
2. cleaner technique
3. more vibrato
4. trying to move out of the pentatonic boxes
5. building a theme (not entirely sure what that means or how to do it, but i suppose that will come with time
Thanks for all your input, this board is really helpful...wish i could subscribe (low bandwidth being the inhibitor)
Wonder if there are a lot of worth while lessons on here that are not necessarily video driven?