Starting out on lead is difficult, seems like you are on the right track though. Got a bit of movement on a theme there. My advice would be to break out of the comfort zone of the pentatonic and experiment with some new shapes. Some of the bends could do with tidying up but its a pretty good effort for overall. Particularly like the fact that you aren't throwing in fast out of time runs (most guys do this when they start out), timing is good and you are sticking to the meter which is also important. Takes a while before you can play a really kick-ass solo but the good news is you're on the right track.