Hrmm.. well.. on a positive note you played all the notes in the correct scale so that is a great start. And I can definitely hear some potential there, it's all just a little too rough at this point but then you already knew that. I think the main problem are the effects you are using, it makes the tone of the guitar sound like a dying cat..

My only real suggestion is that you keep working on that same track a little while longer. Develop a theme for the solo to centre around and don't stay within the B minor pentatonic scale.. at least that's the scale it seems like you're playing in. A good solo can take a little bit of time to develop.. so keep working on it.