LOL cool 333Maxwell, I wasn't bored by the story. I assume most of the people here at GT are not rock stars nor have the luxury of nothing but music going on around them (except for maybe a the lucky few). As for me I'm moving to another state at the moment and have all the concerns of partner and kids moving as well - don't mention Christmas. Yeah sure things we post are rough and most people will get the feel of what you do if nothing more - you ask and people will be honest. I certainly didn't dislike your composition but obviously things I mentioned you connected with as aspects you had thought about in terms of improving your song. Keep posting and I will listen when I get a chance and give some feedback - hopefully you might do the same for me when I get off my lazy butt and put some more stuff up. Cheers.