You got the notes down it seems. You certainly don't suck, but I would just suggest you put more feeling into it...more emphasis/control on vibrato, targeting the bent notes, pick attack, those sorta things. Just play it like you mean it. Overall it came off as a bit timid in my opinion, though it looks and sounds like a fairly challenging song. Regardless, I think you did a good job and I gave you rep for putting it up.
Then again, I don't really even care for this song to begin with (so obviously I don't play it), so what do I know?

Oh yeah...where's the on the knees vertical guitar solo? ;)