I liked the progression a lot (the same as the song Kryptonite, but your take on it was different and creative).
Is this planning on being an instrumental song or one with lyrics? If instrumental, I recommend coming up with a simple melody that the listener can identify with that you can repeat 2 or 3 times throughout the song. It'll act similar to a chorus, and bring unity in the song.
I liked the 2 solos. Very tasty, nice guitar work.
Overall, well done. Keep on working at it.
sincerely,
Justin Armstrong