I really like the lyrics.. they are very Metallica-ish.. but I have to agree with the fundamental point looneytunes was making.. The lyrics just don't go anywhere.. they are certainly interesting and conjure up images but there's no plot/story.

Oh yeh.. and also, unless it is the entire point not to have a standard structure, people "expect" there to be a chorus, which is different to a verse because it repeats itself the same each time it is played. A chorus can be as simple or as complex as you like.. but that's where you put the real message.. may be with the addition of a chorus, the other bits can be put into context..