:I see your sister in her
Sunday dress
She's out to please
she pouts her best
She's out to take
no need to try
She's ready to make
Chorus;
It's so easy
when everybody's tryin to please me
:Cars are crashin every night
I drink and drive
everythings in sight
I make the fire
but I miss the firefight
I hit the bull's eye every night
Chorus;
Repeat........
:So easy
but nothin seems to please me
it all fits so right
when I fade into the night
see me hit you
you fall down
I see you standing there
you think you're so cool
why don't you just
F--- Off................
Etc, etc, etc..........................................
Just reading these lyrics can sound as some sporadic rhyme scheme is used, while other parts in the section(s) "fall off", or lack a sense of purpose.
But, putting the right progression to balance out the lyrics, this could become a great Song.
It's difficult to predict the outcome of an Artist's work without hearing the complete expression behind it.