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RBX_A2
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RBX_A2
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11/10/2007 11:31 pm
Never again will I be blemished
And never again will I be thrown down
Living in the world of the damned
They kill obligation, my only inspiration
But my time is nigh, they are waiting
The thing I treasure most in life
Could be life itself
But life brings pain, I rage again
But where do I begin?
There will never be a reason why, I will surrender tonight
The Thing I treasure most in life
Could be life itself

My soul, my redemption
My only salvation
..........................
For that one moment of peace
I could of given you the world
Instead, I gave the world me
(Chorus)
But change again, cannot be considered
Changing, the light of my fathers
Who stood before me, before us
For that one moment of tranquillity
I lost credibility
(Chorus)

At last though, I have failed you
I have failed you
What to do now?
My soul, inspiration, my own obligation
For that one moment, everything was right
For that one moment, I lost my soul, inspiration, my own obligation
(Chorus)