I thought the lead in was way too long and I found it nerve racking. It wasn't your playing, it was the notes. They just struck a nerve.
After the lead in, there was a long pause before you started playing again. I felt it needed some vocal. After the pause, it got very interesting and I liked it and then came another pause. The finish was good.
It was very good, I just thought there should be some vocal. Again I don't know what you were supposed to do for the project, but that's how I saw it.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving! :)
