well first of all that's not really the type of music I like.. so not sure how much value my opinion has for this one.. anyway.. my only real suggestions would be to add in some Tom-Tom's for a fill here and there. So.. 1. I didn't hear any toms at all.. making it sound like something was missing.. and 2. There are no transition/fills.. also making it sound like something was missing.

but again.. not my preferred style of music so may be I haven't a clue what I am talking about.. also.. one last thing.. Where is the guitar? This is, after all, a guitar website.. lol.. and no guitars..? :)