Thank you both for taking the time to listen and respond. I know the volume is low-I seem to have that problem even though it sounds a lot louder before I record the final version. Perhaps the guitar intro is a bit too long and it is indeed a depressing kind of song but the truth of the matter is it's about a depressing, though real kind of topic. I have received some feedback from some people on similar websites who tell me they have "...been there..." and that they can really identify with this song.

Thanks again for the constructive feedback-I may try to modify this some if I can find the time. My hat is still on!!!!!! :)