Equator, I am listening to your track right now; I felt that the first note was a bit rough but then it picked up pretty nice. The only complaint I have is that you seemed to be playing a little too fast for this track

I can't really explain, your part was good but it just didn't seem to fit for me. I hope you don't misunderstand me. I think you could try eq'ing it a little more, or you could try to do a more melodic take, but I don't really know; Overall I liked your track, solid playing, good licks, but it just doesn't fit for me ^_^

MKylman