I wrote two songs, here they are let me know what u think (i already know the names and lyrics are a little sucky!)plz let me know what u guys think!!

The Thunder Inside (of me)

It was a nice day till' i walked outside
guitar- progression of power chords scaleing up 4 times -,-,-,-

Forecast was for sunny skies
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Dont know why and i dont know how
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Oooh but i felt it within
E chrd. (let ring)

It was the thunder inside of me
E ch. Progression up 2 times -,-

the thunder inside of me
E ch. -,-

I felt it from my head to my toes
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i felt it chatterin' in my bones
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just like sticks and stones
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it must be.....yeah it must
E ch. -,-

It was the thunder inside of me
E -,-

the thunder in side of me

Guitar solo(very simple very short)

Thunder inside!!
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it didnt feel good but it didnt feel bad
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it didnt make me happy it didnt make me sad
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it didnt make me mad either
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couldnt describe it, and i couldnt hide it
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you already know what it is...
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screamed: you already know what it is !!
Ech. -,-

the thunder inside of me
Ech. -,-

thunder inside of me
Ech. -,-

it made me crazy it made me wild
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it made me jump around like a phsyco child
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it made me itch and it made me twitch
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so come on down and see the show
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i hope it never ends
Ech. -,-

it was the the thunder inside of me!!
Ach. cut short w/ drum smash.

2nd song- Crazy

drum intro 10 sec.

Guitar- Pentatonic scale starting at 12th fret up and down (really really fast)
a few times, then some blues/rock at 3rd fret. zakk wylde lick at 5th fret(start out slow) then my sped up lick then z. wylde squeal on 3rd fret finish w/ Ech.
My drummer steve's wild solo

then drum and guitar solo at same time for 1:30 SEC.